Virtual Schools

Can traditional schools replace virtual schools? In the modern age virtual schools have played a significant role. The Virtual classroom is a new and appealing way of studying, which might make(ww.) more interesting.(for whom?). Students study via the internet, and they are not dependant on books and stationery, but on the computer.

This is a great start, but where is the rest?
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Daphna

24 Ahron Yariv St.

Holon

December 3, 2009

Ms. Gilat Simon
The Principal Office
Kugel high school
1 Mota-Gur St.
Holon

Dear Gilat,

This year, as it is already a custom, thousands of 11th grade students, have been given the opportunity to go on a trip to Poland, following the roots of the Jewish nation. This trip is very significant to Israelis and Jews; therefore, I want to take part in this important journey. I am writing this letter because I would like to complain about the enormous price of this journey, which many students can’t afford.

This journey to Poland has a lot of importance to the Jewish life. Many students want to follow this part of our history, but unfortunately their economic situation prevents this desire. It is not right, and it is a discrimination, that only those with economic abilities can go through this emotional experience, which affect(gr.) the continued observation about life.(phr. - not clear what you mean)

Moreover, the main propose of this journey is to remember and not to forget. The best way to remember and try to understand what happened in the Holocaust is by exploring its routs in freezing Poland. But when the price is too high, the students can’t smell the smell(phr.) of horror, and can’t see the places, where six milion innocent victims lived and weremurdered .

To conclude, I believe that it is our government's duty to show(ww.) initiative and finance this journey, so that every teenager in Israel will have the ability to be a part of the expedition going to Poland. I hope you will invest your entire endeavors to lower the price and make this journey approachable for every 11th grader in your school.

I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Emilia Cooper

Very good work.

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Daphna