18 Mota Gur St.

Holon, Israel

January 28, 2010

Yale University
7 Roses St.
New- York, U.S.A

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Emilia. I am twenty five years old. I am writing this letter since I would like to apply for admission to your university. I understand you have an excellent course in theater, which I would really like to take part in.

Since I remember myself, I have always dream(gr.) (of becoming..) an actor.



In conclusion, I would like you to give me the opportunity to participate in the course. I have got much to contribute. Please, make my dream come true.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,
EmiliaCoper.

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The Caribbean Islands Vacation

8 Mota Gur St.

Holon, Israel

21 July, 2010

The Manager's Office

"Sea To See" Tours

7 Roses St.

Tel Aviv, Israel

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Dear Sir/Madam,

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A month ago I went with my fiance on a vacation in the Caribbean Islands, organized by your agency. I have been your customer for the past few years, but unfortunately, this time your service was far from satisfactory.

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First and foremost, I was deeply disappointed with our guide. It seemed that the guide had apparently visited those places for the first (time). As a result, we lost precious time in finding the right routes. To complicate things even further, he did not seem to be very professional, as it was promised in your brochure. On certain occasions, he could not answer the simpliest(sp.) questions about the magnificent places we visited.

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Furthermore, the service we were given in the hotel was dissapointing and did not lap the information written in your brochure. We discovered there were some mistakes regarding the booking, which caused unnecassary inconvenience. When we arrived at the dining room, we were amazed to see that the staff was selfish and unwilling to work.

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To conclude, in the light of the problems mentioned above, I believe it is your duty to give this matter your urgent attention. I request a full refund of the money paid within 14 days.

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Sincerely yours,

Emilia Cooper

Excellent. (I can see that you got some help).

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Daphna

No More Hungry Children!

18 Mota Gur St.
Holon, Israel
January 28, 2010

"Almost An Angel" Organization

7 Roses St.

Jerusalem, Israel

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Dear Sir/Madam,

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In response to an article I have read about your organization called "Almost An Angel", I would like to have the opportunity to join as a volunteer in the organization. I wish to apply for the position of a children caretaker, whose role is to feed and take care (of) hungry children.

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I love(gr. - use the present perfect) children ever since I know myself. They are our future, and seeing misreable children looking for a tiny piece of bread breaks my heart. During(ww.) the years, I used to spend many holidays moving from one supermarket to another trying to convince people to donate some money or products for the sake of these poor children.

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Apart from my love to children, I have a(מיותר) vast experience working with children. Over the past two years, I have been working in a kintergarden as a teacher. This work equipped me with many qualifications, such as working under pressure as well as many tools for education, which I am sure will be required for this job.

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I believe that my qualifications and my valuable exprience make me suitable for this position. I would be more than delighted to come for an interview at your convinience.

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Truly yours,

Emilia Cooper

Very good.

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Daphna